Great chapter, not fond of leeches. A black cloud that sounds like trouble.
Saturday, November 2, 2019
Photo by Dan Antion
Hello, my chuckaboos! Happy November. I’m so glad you came back to the The Delta Pearl.
This week’s random reader things
I didn’t make it a “thing,” but Diana Peach recommended an explanation of how the tempest prognosticator works be added to the story. I try to keep a faster pace in serials, but for the story to stand on its own (without serialized blog introductions), I could see that she was right. That conversation was a few weeks ago. In this chapter I finally worked my way to that.
There are also random reader “things” to fuel this voyage of the steampunk riverboat. First we have Rum from Resa McConaghy. Then we have Chicanery, which could only be supplied by John W. Howell! Finally, a tasty Apple Pie from Dan Antion. Can you…
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