The Delta Pearl, 7 — Catch

Exciting read Teagan!

The Delta Pearl, 6 — Listen

Oh my, that slip is definitely going to leave a mark.

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Saturday, September 7, 2019

Photo by Dan AntionPhoto by Dan Antion

Hello, my chuckaboos!  Welcome back to the #steampunk riverboat, The Delta Pearl.

I was pressed for time this week, so let’s get right to it.

This week’s random reader things

G. P. Cox gave us a thing that was a name, Sir Reginald La Felin.  That actually continues last week’s thing from D. L. (Denise) Finn a Black CatMary J. McCoy-Dressel added Smokestacks to the setting.  Then Deborah M. Zajac gave us Jelly Babies — yes they were around in the Victorian Era!  Doctor Who would be envious.

Thanks to Dan Antion and for letting me use some of his photos. 

If you need to review, click the link for Chapter 5 –ReadThe introduction includes a recap of the passengers.

This chapter is longer than the past few have been.  Consider yourselves warned.   Without…

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The Delta Pearl, 5 — Read

I am intrigued by Benjamin Dundas.

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Saturday, August 31, 2019

Paddlewheel Riverboat by Dan AntionPaddlewheel Riverboat by Dan Antion

Hello, my chuckaboos!  Welcome back to the #steampunk riverboat, The Delta Pearl.

So far we’ve met passengers who include a young, but somewhat nurotic prodigy of an inventor, Dr. Victor Elam. He’s a little older than Émeraude, and she is quite intrigued, despite his imperfections.  Or maybe because of them.  Can anyone so young truly be so accomplished?

Also, we met a very wealthy couple, Randal and Eliza Needleman.  Oh, and their little dog.  Randal earned the respect and gratitude of Sid (the Cadete) through his personality and a generous tip, when the dog got loose.  Eliza seems companionable in her interaction with Émeraude.  Are they as down-to-earth as they seem?

Then there was a young couple on their honeymoon, Harrison and Hyacinth Harvey. Unfortunately they were stuck with their nephew Hershel.  Don’t tell, but I suspect the cherubic…

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The Delta Pearl 4 — Greet

Excellent chapter, the governess and her charge now that is interesting.

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Saturday, August 24, 2019

Original photo by Dan Antion. Tomfoolery by TeaganOriginal photo by Dan Antion. Tomfoolery by Teagan

Welcome back to the #steampunk riverboat, my chuckaboos!  

As you know, I’m re-writing a nearly finished novel, The Delta Pearl, for this serial.  That has resulted in a few changes, such as the heroine, Émeraude, becoming several years younger.  Now both she and one of the passengers (Victor Elam — you met him last time) are in their teens.  Although Victor is a little older than Émeraude.

A story set on a riverboat will have a lot of characters.  Between the passengers and the crew, that’s unavoidable, at least when I’m telling the tale.  I’m trying to make it easier for you to keep track of all these people by how I name them.  Throughout this week, I’ve done a lot of work, renaming the passengers.  Many of you know that I put a lot of…

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The Delta Pearl 3 — Face

Beautifully done Teagan. Hmmm, what’s up with that canister?

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Saturday, August 17, 2019

Welcome, my chuckaboos!  Even though we don’t see one another face-to-face, I do feel you are my dear friends.

jenna-coleman-as-emeraudeJenna Coleman, my original Émeraude

Regardless of physical appeal — and I acknowledge the endlessly different standards of beauty, faces are usually important to how we imagine stories.  Whether we’re writing tales or reading them, seeing a character’s face helps. No matter whether it is handsome or ugly.

When I found the steampunk image that is the basis for the cover of The Delta Pearl, the woman made me think of Jenna Coleman, pictured above.  I saw her as Émeraude.

However, as I began this serial, a re-write of the unfinished novel (and revamped the look of this blog), I ran across the image of the steampunk girl in my banner. (Thank you Pixabay.)  The young girl in my banner reminded me of the Claudia Donovan…

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